Which artists/bands do you want to see at a music festival?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to see BTS at a music festival. I know it is impossible because they became so famous and superstar. But if they can come to the music festival, I will totally enjoy and sing together.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sally!🌸
I am really happy that you also like BTS.💜 I hope you can watch them perform at a music festival. I think it is not impossible for you because they live in South Korea (I envy you.😂)
But for now, let\'s enjoy listening to their music.
Always,
Kelly💜
I want to see BTS at a music festival. >> Correct.
I know it is impossible because they became so famous and superstar.
>> I know it is impossible because they became so famous and superstars.
But if they can come to the music festival, I will totally enjoy and sing together.
>> Correct.
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