Which bad habit of yours do you think would be the most difficult to get rid of? Why?

2023-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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It is difficult to get rid of habbits but some bad habbits are harder to get rid of. I think watching cell phone so long time is so hard to change. I am tired everyday because I wake up at 6am, go to the work, after I check out the work, I go to the fitness center, play golf, and then I go back home. It is always 8:30-9:00pm. Then I have dinner and make some for tomorrow breakfast and lunch. After I wash the dishes and take a shower, it is over 10 pm. This is my routine. So I have to go to bed early, but that time, I start to watching youtube, Netflix and something else. I always think I have to sleep.. I have to sleep... but I don\'t. Then I actually sleep when I can\'t bear no more time. Next morning I always regret myself about didn\'t sleep early yesterday. I regard the time that I did everything I had to do is perfectly my time. So if I didn\'t use that time well, I pretend myself that I\'m just a worker like a robot. It is the reason why I still feel hard to change my habbit.

강사 첨삭

Hello Gem!

I relate with you. Phone addiction is sometimes hard to control because it is so entertaining haha. Anyway, I commend you for your effort this week. You deserve to have a really good time this weekend! See you next week! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

It is difficult to get rid of habbits but some bad habbits are harder to get rid of.

>>It is difficult to get rid of habits but some bad habits are harder to get rid of. (NOTE: Just spelling mistakes here but the sentence is correct ^^ )
I think watching cell phone so long time is so hard to change.

>>I think looking at your cell phone for so long is a habit that is so hard to change.
I am tired everyday because I wake up at 6am, go to the work, after I check out the work, I go to the fitness center, play golf, and then I go back home.

>>I am tired every day because I wake up at 6am, go to work, after I clock out , I go to the fitness center, play golf, and then I go back home.

It is always 8:30-9:00pm.

>>CORRECT!

Then I have dinner and make some for tomorrow breakfast and lunch.

>>Then I have dinner and make some food for tomorrow\'s breakfast and lunch.
After I wash the dishes and take a shower, it is over 10 pm. This is my routine.

>>CORRECT!
So I have to go to bed early, but that time, I start to watching youtube, Netflix and something else.

>>So I have to go to bed early, but at that time, I start watching YouTube, Netflix and something else.
I always think I have to sleep.. I have to sleep... but I don\'t. Then I actually sleep when I can\'t bear no more time.

>>I always think, \"I have to sleep. I have to sleep.\" But I don\'t. Then I actually sleep when I can\'t bear it anymore.
Next morning I always regret myself about didn\'t sleep early yesterday.

>>The next morning, I always regret not sleeping early the night before.
I regard the time that I did everything I had to do is perfectly my time.

>>I regard the time that I did everything I had to do as perfectly my time.
So if I didn\'t use that time well, I pretend myself that I\'m just a worker like a robot.

>>So if I didn\'t use that time well, I pretend that I\'m just a worker like a robot.

It is the reason why I still feel hard to change my habbit.

>>It is the reason why it\'s still hard for me to change my habits.

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