Which beverages do you think are the most popular in the world and in your country?
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I think Coca-Cola is the most popular everywhere. It\\\'s because most of people always pack it. Especially, they have a party or go to picnic. And I think its company\\\'s marketing is so good working. So Coca-Cola is expected to continue to be popular in the future. Also, Soju is the most popular alcohol in Korea. However, Beer seems to be the most popular in foreign countries. I hope they will experience this soju, too.
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Hello Cindy!
Thank you for letting me know the famous drinks you think in your country. But don\'t forget that water is also the most important among them all. ^^
~T. Maine
I think Coca-Cola is the most popular everywhere.
>>I think Coca-Cola is the most popular beverage everywhere.
It\\\'s because most of people always pack it.
>>It\'s because most people always pack it.
Especially, they have a party or go to picnic.
>> There are many people who prefer to buy it when they have a party or go to a picnic.
And I think its company\\\'s marketing is so good working.
>>And I think its company\'s marketing is so good.
So Coca-Cola is expected to continue to be popular in the future.
>>Correct.
>>Or: Therefore, this soda has been popular for a long time.
Also, Soju is the most popular alcohol in Korea.
>>Correct.
>>Or: In addition to this, soju is a well-known alcohol drink in Korea.
However, Beer seems to be the most popular in foreign countries.
>>However, beer seems to be the most popular liquor in foreign countries.
I hope they will experience this soju, too.
>>I hope they will try soju too.
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