Which car brand/model is becoming popular among your peers
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Camping in a car increased from 2016 in Korea. It was doubled after Corona epidemic.Often called “cha-bak” in Korean, which translates to “staying overnight in a car,” this type of camping is especially loved by youngsters who want to save their time and budget for a quick trip during weekends.Steps for car camping are easy to follow, park on a flat area, setting up a bed by installing an air mattress on flattened backseats and fill the place with music, lights and decorations. So, many korean want to buy a car which can be used comfortably in camping.
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~ T. CamilleCamping in a car increased from 2016 in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
It was doubled after Corona epidemic.
>> It was doubled after the Corona pandemic occured.
Often called “cha-bak” in Korean, which translates to “staying overnight in a car,” this type of camping is especially loved by youngsters who want to save their time and budget for a quick trip during weekends.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Often called “cha-bak” in Korean, which translates to “staying overnight in a car,” this type of camping is especially loved by youngsters who want to save their time and budget for a quick trip on weekends.
Steps for car camping are easy to follow, park on a flat area, setting up a bed by installing an air mattress on flattened backseats and fill the place with music, lights and decorations.
>> Steps for car camping are easy to follow, park on a flat area, sett up a bed by installing an air mattress on flattened backseats, and fill the place with music, lights and decorations.
So, many korean want to buy a car which can be used comfortably in camping.
>> So, many Koreans want to buy a car which can be used comfortably for camping.
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