Which car model is popular among your peers? What could be the reason behind it?
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Most of my friends and peers are replacing their car by SUV models. The reason behind this choice is that they get now family and kids. Seats behind are more comfortable for SUV models than Sedan ones. My friends have between 30thies and 40thies. So their children are quiet young. For drivers, SUV models are also more easy to manipulate because the seat of driver is placed more high. So the driver can have the view more wide which is important point when you are driving. SUV models cost more than most of the sedan models. People who are in their 40thies, they are in the middle management position in the company. They have quite sufficient salaries. So they want to show off their buying power by purchasing SUV car. That is one of the reasons that SUV brands are generally targeting this age of people for the marketing and the communication.
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Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Oh, I bet people from these different car company would soon target you to buy a new car - HEHEHE.
Thank you for sharing!
Most of my friends and peers are replacing their car by SUV models.
>>Most of my friends replacing cars with SUV models.
The reason behind this choice is that they get now family and kids.
>>The reason behind this choice is that they now have families and kids.
Seats behind are more comfortable for SUV models than Sedan ones.
>>SUV\'s back seat is more comfortable than a sedan.
My friends have between 30thies and 40thies.
>>My friends are in their 30\'s and 40\'s.
So their children are quiet young.
>>So their childre are quite young.
For drivers, SUV models are also more easy to manipulate because the seat of driver is placed more high.
>>For drivers, the SUV model is also easier to operate as the driver\'s seat is placed higher.
So the driver can have the view more wide which is important point when you are driving.
>>So the driver can see an important point of view wider when you are driving.
SUV models cost more than most of the sedan models.
>>CORRECT!
OR: SUV models are more expensive than most sedan models.
People who are in their 40thies, they are in the middle management position in the company.
>>People who are in their 40\'s hold middle management positions in the company.
They have quite sufficient salaries.
>>CORRECT!
OR: They are quite well paid.
So they want to show off their buying power by purchasing SUV car.
>>So they want to show off their purchasing power by buying SUVs.
That is one of the reasons that SUV brands are generally targeting this age of people for the marketing and the communication.
>>That\'s one of the reasons SUV brands are generally targeting this age.
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