Which cartoon character would you be and why?ᩚ
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I would like to be a spider man if I can be because if I become a spider man, I can swing though the building and it would be like riding enormous zip line. Secondly, I could stick around everywhere and I also won’t get any gravity. Lastly, it would be amazing I can fly and do incredible actions through many buildings. I feel like swinging web is super amazing and unbelievable than any other magics.
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I would like to be a spider man if I can be because if I become a spider
man, I can swing though the building and it would be like riding
enormous zip line. Secondly, I could stick around everywhere and I also
won’t get any gravity. Lastly, it would be amazing I can fly and do
incredible actions through many buildings. I feel like swinging web is
super amazing and unbelievable than any other magics.
>> I would like to be a spider man if I can be because if I become a spider
man, I can swing through the building and it would be like riding
an enormous zip line. Secondly, I could stick around everywhere and I also
won’t get any gravity. Lastly, it would be amazing I can fly and do
incredible actions through many buildings. I feel like swinging using a web is
super amazing and unbelievable than any other magics.
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