Which celebrity would you like to meet?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have a favorite celebrity? I'll talk about who I want to meet if I can meet a celebrity.
First of all, I want to see a girl group called "My Girlfriend." I'd love to see you so much. Of course, I have seen many fan meetings and concerts, but I want to spend time with my girlfriend alone.
강사 첨삭
Do you have a favorite celebrity? I\'ll talk about who I want to meet if I can meet a celebrity.
>>CORRECT
First of all, I want to see a girl group called \"My Girlfriend.\" I\'d love to see you so much.
>>First of all, I want to see a girl group called \"My Girlfriend.\" I\'d love to see that so much.
Of course, I have seen many fan meetings and concerts, but I want to spend time with my girlfriend alone.
>>CORRECT
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