Which celebrity would you like to meet? What would you do if you could spend a day with this person?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am not a fan of celebrities but I am a fan of songs.
So I don\'t want someone to meet, I just want Justin Bieber, Charlie Puth, or Billie Eilish to listen their songs for live.
I want them to stand up and sing songs for a day and I do someting like my daily routine next to them.
And.. I don\'t want do something with them.. so I don\'t know what to write..
Teacher kate have you ever seen the Justin Bieber video like youtube shorts about the song \"Stay\" live?
That was so impressed to me. So I leave the link ot that.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bj1LwHMXFYU
If you watched it, your time could be a good time hehe
강사 첨삭
Hello Gem!
I love those artists too! Thanks for sharing your thoughts about them. I think we have the same taste in music! Thanks for you efforts too. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I am not a fan of celebrities but I am a fan of songs.
>>CORRECT!
So I don\'t want someone to meet, I just want Justin Bieber, Charlie Puth, or Billie Eilish to listen their songs for live.
So I don\'t want someone to meet, I just want Justin Bieber, Charlie Puth, or Billie Eilish to listen their songs for live.
>>So I don\'t want to meet someone else. I just want Justin Bieber, Charlie Puth, or Billie Eilish. I want to listen their songs live.
I want them to stand up and sing songs for a day and I do someting like my daily routine next to them.
I want them to stand up and sing songs for a day and I do someting like my daily routine next to them.
>>I want them to stand up and sing songs for a day while I do something like my daily routine next to them.
And.. I don\'t want do something with them.. so I don\'t know what to write..
And.. I don\'t want do something with them.. so I don\'t know what to write..
>>I don\'t really want to do anything with them so I don\'t know what to write.
Teacher kate have you ever seen the Justin Bieber video like youtube shorts about the song \"Stay\" live?
Teacher kate have you ever seen the Justin Bieber video like youtube shorts about the song \"Stay\" live?
>>Teacher Kate, have you ever seen the Youtube shorts video of Justin Bieber singing the song \"Stay\" live?
That was so impressed to me.
>>That was so impressive to me.
So I leave the link ot that.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bj1LwHMXFYU
>>So I will leave the link to that for you. It is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bj1LwHMXFYU
If you watched it, your time could be a good time hehe.
>>You could have a good time if you watch it.
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