Which charity or charitable cause is most deserving of money?
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Which charity or charitable cause is most deserving of money?
Actually, i don\'t like charity or charitable thing.
>>Actually, I don\'t like charity or charitable things.
And also i don\'t want to donate money for them.
>>And also, I don\'t want to donate money to them.
I saw lots of charity advertisements on the past.
>>I saw lots of charitable advertisements in the past.
And i figured out those ads were fake.
>>And I figured out that those ads were fake.
They were not true.
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or>>They were not honest ads.
For example, I saw the advertisement which was about a very poor orphan.
>>For example, I saw an advertisement about a very poor orphan.
It made me like i want to contribute them.
>>It made me like I want to contribute something to them.
So I sent some money to them.
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or>>So, I gave them some money.
But after some time pass, I saw the news about the charity advertisements.
>>But after some time have passed, I saw a news about the charitable advertisement.
And that news said that the charity company which i donated had been looking for the actor who could really act like orphans.
>>And that news gave an information that the charitable agency, where I donated my money, had been looking for some actors who could really act like orphans.
So the orphan who was i saw before was the actor.
>>So, the orphan whom I saw before was actually an actor.
He can literally speak English fluently and have home, his family own.
>>He can literally speak English fluently and he has a house with his own family.
I have more reason that i don\'t believe the charity company but this is the most huge reason that i don\'t believe the charity companies.
>>I have more reasons why I don\'t believe these charities, but this is the hugest reason why I don\'t believe such companies.
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