Which city do you want to live in and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live in seoul.
Beacause it\'s a very big city in Korea.
But there is many cars.
And fine dust.
And there is many people too.
I like seoul, seoul is good.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
See you tomorrow and thank you for doing your homework ^^
T. DON
Beacause it\'s a very big city in Korea.
But there is many cars.
And fine dust.
And there is many people too.
I like seoul, seoul is good.
>> I want to live in Seoul because it\'s a very big city in Korea but there are many cars and fine dust. And there are also many people too. I like Seoul, it is a good city.
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