Which city in your country do you consider the most dangerous and why?

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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i din't go all city in korea yet,i went to trip with my sister by a train. In korea, student can buy a rail ticket that can be used for seven days. I went to many city and country in the korea as using the ticket. But whereever i visit a country or city, there are not a city very dangerous. Especially, people in korea's country has "jung". it means that people give what they has someone althouth they din't know who you are. They has a warm heart. usally, people think country is more dangerous rather than city. But i think country is not dangerous. But when the city or country are dark or silent, going alone arount the city is can be a dangerous behavior althouht that is a safe place.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Let\'s talk more about this in our class. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea i din\'t go all city in korea yet,i went to trip with my sister by a train. >> I didn\'t go to all the cities in Korea yet. I went on a trip with my sister by train.In korea, student can buy a rail ticket that can be used for seven days. >> In Korea, students can buy rail tickets that can be used for seven days.I went to many city and country in the korea as using the ticket. >> I went to many cities and provinces in Korea using the ticket.But whereever i visit a country or city, there are not a city very dangerous. >> But the cities or provinces I visited were not dangerous.Especially, people in korea\'s country has \"jung\". >> Do you mean. \"Especially, people who live in provinces has \"jung\". it means that people give what they has someone althouth they din\'t know who you are. >> It means that people give what they have to someone even though they don\'t know them. They has a warm heart. >> They have a warm heart.usally, people think country is more dangerous rather than city. >> Usually people think that province is more dangerous than city. But i think country is not dangerous. >> But I think province is not dangerous.But when the city or country are dark or silent, going alone arount the city is can be a dangerous behavior althouht that is a safe place. >> But when the city or province is dark or silent, going out alone around the city can be dangerous even though its a safe place.

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