Which city in your country do you consider the most dangerous and why?
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i din't go all city in korea yet,i went to trip with my sister by a train.
In korea, student can buy a rail ticket that can be used for seven days.
I went to many city and country in the korea as using the ticket.
But whereever i visit a country or city, there are not a city very dangerous.
Especially, people in korea's country has "jung". it means that people give what they has someone althouth they din't know who you are. They has a warm heart.
usally, people think country is more dangerous rather than city. But i think country is not dangerous.
But when the city or country are dark or silent, going alone arount the city is can be a dangerous behavior althouht that is a safe place.
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i din\'t go all city in korea yet,i went to trip with my sister by a train.
>> I didn\'t go to all the cities in Korea yet. I went on a trip with my sister by train.In korea, student can buy a rail ticket that can be used for seven days.
>> In Korea, students can buy rail tickets that can be used for seven days.I went to many city and country in the korea as using the ticket.
>> I went to many cities and provinces in Korea using the ticket.But whereever i visit a country or city, there are not a city very dangerous.
>> But the cities or provinces I visited were not dangerous.Especially, people in korea\'s country has \"jung\".
>> Do you mean. \"Especially, people who live in provinces has \"jung\".
it means that people give what they has someone althouth they din\'t know who you are.
>> It means that people give what they have to someone even though they don\'t know them.
They has a warm heart.
>> They have a warm heart.usally, people think country is more dangerous rather than city.
>> Usually people think that province is more dangerous than city.
But i think country is not dangerous.
>> But I think province is not dangerous.But when the city or country are dark or silent, going alone arount the city is can be a dangerous behavior althouht that is a safe place.
>> But when the city or province is dark or silent, going out alone around the city can be dangerous even though its a safe place.
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