Which classmates do I sometimes spend my breaks with? The reason is?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Ms. [Name]. I am [Name]. I\\\'d love to meet you again! I do not spend much time with my friends, but I somtimes play a lot with many friends. There is a boy named Ujjin, [ Oo-Jii n ], and I play with him mostly. When I want to read, I just take out the english book and read! So I could say that I play with Ojjin and my BOOK. hahahahahaha!! Excuse me, Bye! Ms.Lyn. ^_^ ~
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather! Thank you for telling me that you want to meet me again. I like seeing you also every day. Continue doing your homework. Always, ~T. Lyn
Hi! Ms. [Name].
>>Correct.
I am [Name].
>>Correct.
I\\\'d love to meet you again!
>>I would love to meet you again.
I do not spend much time with my friends, but I somtimes play a lot with many friends.
>>I don\'t spend much time with my friends but I sometimes play with them.
There is a boy named Ujjin, [ Oo-Jii n ], and I play with him mostly.
>>I play with my friend mostly and his name is Uijin.
When I want to read, I just take out the english book and read!
>>I take out my English book when I want to read it.
So I could say that I play with Ojjin and my BOOK. hahahahahaha!!
>>Therefore, it can be said that I spend most of my time playing with Uijin and reading my book.
Excuse me, Bye! Ms.Lyn.
>>Correct.
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