Which contry do you want to travel to?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to travel in L.A because I want to see the vest land and Hollywood.
but I\'m not interested in the New york. because often I saw new york city on the TV Show.
and I like a nature, the quiet, a various beach,, ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gina!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you, New York is always shown on TV so people already know what to expect when going there.
-T. Caitlyn
I want to travel in L.A because I want to see the vest land and Hollywood.
>> I want to travel to L.A. because I want to see the best landmarks and Hollywood.
but I\'m not interested in the New york. because often I saw new york city on the TV Show.
but I\'m not interested in the New york. because often I saw new york city on the TV Show.
>> But I\'m not interested in New York because I often see it on TV shows.
and I like a nature, the quiet, a various beach,
and I like a nature, the quiet, a various beach,
>> Also, I prefer nature, quiet, and various beaches.
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