Which countries are near the Indian ocean? Write about about one country and how it use the ocean.
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I think the Indian ocean country is two countries, one country is india two country is india-china country.
Indian ocean is very beautiful.
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Hi Jimmy!
This is your third revised composition for today. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Which countries are near the Indian ocean? Write about about one country and how it use the ocean.
I think the Indian ocean country is two countries, one country is india two country is india-china country.
>>> I think the countries near the Indian Ocean are two: one is India, and the other is China.
>>> OR: I think there are two countries near the Indian Ocean: India and China.
Indian ocean is very beautiful.
>>> The Indian Ocean is very beautiful.
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