Which countries have you been to?
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I have been to Sebu island in Philippine in February with my husband. Except for daughters.
The purpose of the trip was only rest.
We relaxed at the resort.
We enjoyed skin scuba and playing in the water park.
It was the first experience to me. Until now we always had to take care of daughters in the water park without enjoying for ourselves.
We realized that we needed a couple-only trip.
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Which countries have you been to?
I have been to Sebu island in Philippine in February with my husband. >>I have been to Cebu island, in the Philippines last February with my husband.
Except for daughters.
>>We went there without our daughters.
The purpose of the trip was only rest.
The purpose of the trip was only rest.
>>The purpose of the trip was only for us to have some rest.
We relaxed at the resort.
We relaxed at the resort.
CORRECT
or>>We took a much needed rest at the resort.
We enjoyed skin scuba and playing in the water park.
>>We enjoyed skin and scuba diving, as well as playing in the water park.
***(skin diving[snorkeling, no air tank] and scuba diving[diving with air tank] are two different things).
It was the first experience to me. >>It was a first for me.
or>>It was my first time to experience this kind of thing.
Until now we always had to take care of daughters in the water park without enjoying for ourselves.
>>Before that, we always had to take care of our daughters in the water park without enjoying ourselves.
We realized that we needed a couple-only trip.
We realized that we needed a couple-only trip.
CORRECT!
or>>It dawned on us that we needed this kind of trip, where there\'s just the two of us.
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