Which country do you think has the best desserts? Explain your answer.
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I think French because there\'s Michelin and Europe has a lot of delicious food.
Also UK dessert is delicious because there have many colony so have variety of food.
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Which country do you think has the best desserts? Explain your answer.
I think French because there\'s Michelin and Europe has a lot of delicious food.
>> CORRECT~~
Also UK dessert is delicious because there have many colony so have variety of food.
>> Also, British dessert is delicious because there are many colonies so they have a variety of food.
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