Which country do you think is not a safe place to live in?
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I have never been to forein countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don\'t know about safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety. When I was young, I heard that Mexico is not safe to live. People said that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don\'t know whether it\'s true or not. Also there was a news that in India, many people raped a girl in a middle of street. India is wide so the safety level would be different between areas but it\'s definite some areas are extremely dangerous.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
If you hear red flags about a certain country, better not take a risk. Did you know that there is a place in Mexico where a lot of Koreans flock? Most travelers consider Cancun to be safe most of the time. The region maintains its reputation as a low-crime, safe city even beyond the hotel zone. However, no matter where you are, it\'s a good idea to be cautious and aware of your surroundings.
Have a good searching :)
T. Aki
I have never been to forein countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don\'t know about safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety.
>>> I have never been to foreign countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don\'t know about the safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety.
When I was young, I heard that Mexico is not safe to live. People said that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don\'t know whether it\'s true or not.
>>> When I was young, I heard that Mexico was not safe to live in. People say that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don\'t know whether it\'s true or not.
Also there was a news that in India, many people raped a girl in a middle of street.
>>> Also there was news that in India, many people raped a girl in the middle of the street.
India is wide so the safety level would be different between areas but it\'s definite some areas are extremely dangerous.
>>> India is so wide, I think the safety level would be different between areas but it\'s definite some areas are extremely dangerous.
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