Which country do you wish to visit, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love soccer and I played soccer every sunday. Also one of my bucket list is watching England soccer league(Premier League).
So, I wish to visit England.
강사 첨삭
Hello, good morning Kevin!
Thank you for your diligence writing your thought.
I guess you have to follow your dreams while you are young because when you become a working adult, most of your time will be spent at work, unless your work requires you to travel to different places.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~
I love soccer and I played soccer every sunday.
>>> I love soccer and I played soccer every Sunday.
I Also one of my bucket list is watching England soccer league(Premier League).
>>> Also, one of my bucket lists is watching the England soccer league(Premier League)
So, I wish to visit England.
>>> CORRECT!
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