Which country is your favorite sports player from? Why do you like this athlete?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite sports player is Son Heung-min, he is from South Korea.
I like him because he is a good soccer player, famous, he is from Korea like me.
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Which country is your favorite sports player from? Why do you like this athlete?
My favorite sports player is Son Heung-min, he is from South Korea.
>> OR: Son Heung-min is my favorite athlete and he\'s from South Korea.
I like him because he is a good soccer player, famous, he is from Korea like me.
>> I like him because he\'s a good soccer player, famous, and from South Korea just like me.
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