Which country\'s food do you like the most? Why?

2023-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I like the Korean Food because I can\'t eat greasy food like butter bread, cream pasta, egg tarte well. I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi food and something else. When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I can\'t eat over 5 days. Because the Japanese cusine is a little bit salty and greasy. And then I went to Hongkong, their food was greasy and spicy. Hongkong food didn\'t match with my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and alcohol for dinner. I just ate Hongkong food for lunch. But maybe I can eat all countries\' food if they are not greasy. I even don\'t eat a cake on my birthday. So it is exactly right that I just like food which isn\'t greasy no matter what does it come from.

강사 첨삭

Hello Gem!
Reading your writing made me hungry (haha)! I learned something new about you today - you don\'t like greasy food. We are very similar in that aspect. Thanks for your time and effort in writing. See you in our next class!
~~Teacher Kate 

I like the Korean Food because I can\'t eat greasy food like butter bread, cream pasta, egg tarte well.
>>I like Korean food because I can\'t eat greasy food like buttered bread, cream pasta, and egg tart well.
I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi food and something else.
>>I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi dishes and something else.
When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I can\'t eat over 5 days.
>>When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I couldn\'t eat more beyond those 5 days.
Because the Japanese cusine is a little bit salty and greasy. 
>>It\'s because Japanese cuisine is a little bit salty and greasy. 
And then I went to Hongkong, their food was greasy and spicy. 
>>CORRECT!
Hongkong food didn\'t match with my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and alcohol for dinner. 
>>Hongkong food didn\'t match my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and drank alcohol for dinner. 
I just ate Hongkong food for lunch. 
>>CORRECT!
But maybe I can eat all countries\' food if they are not greasy.
>>CORRECT!
I even don\'t eat a cake on my birthday. 
>>I don\'t even eat cake on my birthday. 
So it is exactly right that I just like food which isn\'t greasy no matter what does it come from.
>>So it is safe to say that I just like food which aren\'t greasy no matter where it comes from.

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