Which country's food do you like the most? Why?

2014-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Food that I like is pizza, hamburgers, and sweet breads. They are mostly American food although pizza has originated from Italy. I sometimes enjoy Chinese food that is oily and mostly fried. Looking at the list of my favorite food, I tend to prefer wheat meals because all those food is made from wheat flours. There is a saying that the food that has strong and sweet taste is not good for your body. The problem is that I have indigestion when I eat such food. Almost all Korean parents believe that wheat meals are not good for health and try not to feed their children with them whereas kids are crazy about them because they are more delicious and tempting. We have been educated to avoid wheat meals like breads since we were young. In fact, my stomach and digestion system work fine when I eat meals that are made from rice and vegetables. In that sense, I need to eat typical Korean food which taste is not strong, but unfortunately, my tongue seeks sweet food that is not healthy.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about your favorite food.

I really like eating hamburger and that\'s why I look like a hamburger. Hihihi.^^

I\'m sorry to hear about that, but it\'s nice that you are knowledgeable about the foods that you should avoid.

I think it is really important for a person to know what is good and bad for her/ him.

It is really hard to get sick. I hope that you will always feel great and healthy.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.

Teacher Nina

 

Food that I like is pizza, hamburgers, and sweet breads.

>> The foods that I like are pizza, hamburgers and sweet breads.

They are mostly American food although pizza has originated from Italy.

>> They are mostly American food although pizza has originated in Italy.

>> OR: They are mostly American food although pizza is from Italy.

I sometimes enjoy Chinese food that is oily and mostly fried.

>> Correct

Looking at the list of my favorite food, I tend to prefer wheat meals because all those food is made from wheat flours.

>> Did you mean: Looking at the list of my favorite foods, I prefer wheat meals because all of those foods are made from wheat flours.

There is a saying that the food that has strong and sweet taste is not good for your body.

>> There is a saying that the food that has a strong and sweet taste is not good for our body.

The problem is that I have indigestion when I eat such food.

>> Correct

>> OR: The problem is that I have indigestion when I eat those foods.

>> OR: I have a problem in my digestive tract so I can\'t eat those foods.

Almost all Korean parents believe that wheat meals are not good for health and try not to feed their children with them whereas kids are crazy about them because they are more delicious and tempting.

>> Most Korean parents believe that wheat meals are not good for health and try not to feed their children with them whereas, kids are crazy about them because they are more delicious and tempting.

We have been educated to avoid wheat meals like breads since we were young.

>> We have been educated to avoid wheat meals like bread since we were young.

In fact, my stomach and digestion system work fine when I eat meals that are made from rice and vegetables.

>>  In fact, my digestive tract works fine when I eat meals are made of rice and vegetables.

In that sense, I need to eat typical Korean food which taste is not strong, but unfortunately, my tongue seeks sweet food that is not healthy.

>> Correct

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