Which country would you like to visit in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to visit in London.
Because I want to go Tottenham Hotspur stadium.
I\'m a fan of Tottenham and fan of Son Heung-min who is the attacker in Tottenham.
He is also a captain of korean national team.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Because I want to go Tottenham Hotspur stadium.
I\'m a fan of Tottenham and fan of Son Heung-min who is the attacker in Tottenham.
He is also a captain of korean national team.
I would like to visit in London.
>>I would like to visit London.
>>CORRECT
I\'m a fan of Tottenham and fan of Son Heung-min who is the attacker in Tottenham.
>>I\'m a fan of Tottenham and also a fan of Son Heung-min who is the attacker in Tottenham.
He is also a captain of korean national team.
>>He is also the captain of the Korean national team.
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