Which country would you like to visit with your family ?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to visit Malaysia with my family.
Because there are many place to visit in Malaysia . It is also close to Hongkong. I love the Hongkong smigle store . I want shopping in Malaysia .
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Because there are many place to visit in Malaysia .
I would like to visit Malaysia with my family.
>>CORRECT
Because there are many place to visit in Malaysia .
>>Because there are many places to visit in Malaysia .
It is also close to Hongkong.
>>CORRECT (Hong Kong)
I love the Hongkong smigle store .
>>I love the Hong Kong Smiggle store .
I want shopping in Malaysia .
>>I want to go shopping in Malaysia .
>>I want to go shopping in Malaysia .
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