Which country would you love to visit in the future?

2019-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I would like to visit around the world. Above all, Europe. If I can choice only one country, I must choice a SWITZERLAND. Because what a beautiful nature they have each season. And the color is so fantastic! I usually watch a INSTAGRAM. Pictures uploaded for many people. So I can see a lot of picture, especially I can see travel pictures. Whenever I watch the SWITZERLAND picture, summer color is clear green and winter color is pure white. I\'m interested in there.

강사 첨삭

I would like to visit around the world.

>> CORRECT


Above all, Europe.

>> CORRECT


If I can choice only one country, I must choice a SWITZERLAND.

>> But, if I can choose a country, I must choose Switzerland.


Because what a beautiful nature they have each season.

>> They usually have beautiful nature each season.


And the color is so fantastic! I usually watch a INSTAGRAM.

>> and the colors are fantastic! I usually see them in Instagram!


Pictures uploaded for many people.

>> Pictures that are uploaded by many people.


So I can see a lot of picture, especially I can see travel pictures.

>> I\'ve been seeing a lot of pictures and I also can see travel pictures too!


Whenever I watch the SWITZERLAND picture, summer color is clear green and winter color is pure white. I\'m interested in there.

>> I\'ve been interested in that place after seeing the summer pictures that are green and winter colors that are pure white from the pictures in Switzerland 

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