Which country would you most like to visit someday? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'d like to visit Croatia. Because I watched tv show about travel, I saw the traveler is visiting to Croatia. And there\'s scenery is very beautiful. So my dad want to go there too. If I get older, I will go there first.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Wow, Croatia is a beautiful place to wander. I hope you can fulfill your dreams in the near future. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
I\'d like to visit Croatia.
>>CORRECT
Because I watched tv show about travel,
>>Because I watched a TV show about travel,
I saw the traveler is visiting to Croatia.
>>I saw a traveler visiting Croatia.
And there\'s scenery is very beautiful.
>>And the scenery is mesmerizing.
So my dad want to go there too.
>>So my dad wants to go there too.
If I get older, I will go there first.
>>CORRECT
OR>>This will be the first place I\'ll visit when I get older.
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