Which disaster do you fear most?
학생이 쓴 원문
I fear flood. When I was work, our area was flood. It rained 750mm only one night. A lot of house disappeared, some people died. A lot of farmland was flooded, electricity shut down. We was lost a lot of things. This rain was not from typhoon, it was local torrential rainfalls. It damaged in our area. Nowadays we had a sudden change of weather. So we have to prepare it before. But I am not sure how to prepare it. We have a lot of natural disaster. So I fear summer season. I want to the earth become comfortable place.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
Everybody has certain fears. Have you watched the movie \"Crawl\"? It is the story of an area where there was a flood, and a crocodile entered someone\'s residence. It was scary, and when I saw this, I got scared of going closer to the murky area. ^^
Aki~
I fear flood.
>> I fear floods.
When I was work, our area was flood.
>> When I was at work, our area was flooded.
It rained 750mm only one night.
>> It rained 750mm only in one night.
A lot of house disappeared, some people died.
>> A lot of houses were submerged under water, and some people died.
A lot of farmland was flooded, electricity shut down.
>> A lot of farmland was flooded, and electricity was shut down.
We was lost a lot of things.
>> We lost a lot of things.
This rain was not from typhoon, it was local torrential rainfalls.
>> This rain was not from a typhoon; it was local torrential rain.
It damaged in our area.
>> It damaged our area.
Nowadays we had a sudden change of weather. So we have to prepare it before.
>> Nowadays, we have a sudden change of weather. So we have to prepare ahead of time.
But I am not sure how to prepare it.
>> CORRECT!
We have a lot of natural disaster.
>> We have a lot of natural disasters.
So I fear summer season.
>> So I fear the summer season.
I want to the earth become comfortable place.
>>> I want the Earth to become a comfortable place.
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