Which do you enjoy more : earning money or spending money?

2024-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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I think a lot of people will answer the same. Yes, I enjoy spending money more! Because to earn money, I have to invest my time and effort, work hard, and go to work instead of a comfortable house. On the contray, spending money can be easily used to just buy what I like, eat delicious things, and go to good places. I also spend money on my favorite drama and celebrity goods and meet my friends, and I usually use them to eat delicious food. But I think earning moeny can be proud and rewarding. I feel proud that I\'m still a healthy age to work and I think I can feel rewarded because I earn money by working hard. So, earning money and spending money are interconnected, it\'s impossible to think about it by dropping it. Shouldn\'t I get a job and earn money to enjoy the things I like? P.S.) I was sorry to hear your situation today. Thank you so much for teaching me even though you\'re sick. I hope you get well soon after resting well over the weekend!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
It\'s spending for me as well! But after spending a lot of money, I regret it. It should always be in our ability to balance things.
By the way, I appreciate you wishing me well... I got better a few hours after our class... ^___^ I hope your weekend was wonderful.
Chammy
I think a lot of people will answer the same.
Yes, I enjoy spending money more!
Because to earn money, I have to invest my time and effort, work hard, and go to work instead of a comfortable house.
>>Correct
On the contray, spending money can be easily used to just buy what I like, eat delicious things, and go to good places.
>> On the contrary, spending money can be easily used to just buy what I like, eat delicious things, and go to good places.
I also spend money on my favorite drama and celebrity goods and meet my friends, and I usually use them to eat delicious food.
But I think earning moeny can be proud and rewarding.
>>But I think earning money can be proud and rewarding
I feel proud that I\'m still a healthy age to work and I think I can feel rewarded because I earn money by working hard.
So, earning money and spending money are interconnected, it\'s impossible to think about it by dropping it.
Shouldn\'t I get a job and earn money to enjoy the things I like?
P.S.) I was sorry to hear your situation today. Thank you so much for teaching me even though you\'re sick. I hope you get well soon after resting well over the weekend!!
>>Correct

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