Which do you like better, a home with a nice garden or a home without one? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like a home with a nice garden than without it, because I want to raise my own plants and beautiful flowers for season. I like flowers, so it will be very helpful for me to raise my own flowers.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Nick! ^^
We both prefer the same thing.
Thank you for this!
We both prefer the same thing.
Thank you for this!
See you in class tomorrow! ^^
- T. Rina
1. I like a home with a nice garden than without it, because I want to raise my own plants and beautiful flowers for season.
>> CORRECT!
OR: I prefer having a home with a nice garden because I would love to grow some plants and flowers.
2. I like flowers, so it will be very helpful for me to raise my own flowers.
>> CORRECT!
OR: I like flowers, so having a garden will really make me happy.
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