Which do you prefer and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to stay in a large, modern hotel. And a luxurious hotel would be better, right?
Well, I think it\'s better because I\'m used to staying in a large and modern hotel while traveling, and even though it\'s expensive, it provides services and auxiliary facilities accordingly.
In addition, large and modern hotels also have restaurants connected, so it\'s better not to worry about eating.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You did really well on making this essay.
Great work! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I prefer to stay in a large, modern hotel. And a luxurious hotel would be better, right?
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
Well, I think it\'s better because I\'m used to staying in a large and modern hotel while traveling, and even though it\'s expensive, it provides services and auxiliary facilities accordingly.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I prefer them because I’m accustomed to that style, and the top-tier service justifies the price.
In addition, large and modern hotels also have restaurants connected, so it\'s better not to worry about eating.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Plus, having on-site dining means I don’t have to stress about finding a a place to eat.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.