Which do you prefer, living in the city or in the country side?(ANSWER)
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Which do you prefer, living in the city or in the country side?
Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I prefer living in the country side.
Because it is peaceful and relaxed.
When I go to Ulleung island, I realize the importance of time.
Living in the country side allows us to spend time efficiently and comfortably.
If there is the farm, you can see many animals. And if I\'m farming, I can eat
my own ingredients.
Now in city, we are living like we are pressed for time.
Also we have to study everywhere.:(
I think the city has a cold feelings and the countryside has a warm feelings.
So, I prefer livig in the countryside.
CORRECTIONS:
I prefer living in the
country side.
In the country side, it is peaceful and relaxed.
When I go to Ulleung Island, I realize the importance of time.
Living in the country side allows us to spend time efficiently and comfortably.
If there is a farm, you can see many animals. And if
I\'m farming, I can eat my own ingredients.
Now in city, we are living like we are pressed for time.
Also, we have to study everywhere. :(
I think the city has cold feelings and the countryside has warm feelings.
So, I prefer living in the countryside.
** Dear [이름], well done. ^^ You just have few corrections in your homework. Please take note of them.
Speak with you on tomorrow. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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