Which do you prefer, living in the city or in the country side? Please answer in details.

2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I prefer living in the country side. because in the country side of air is fresh. but in the city of air is dirty and has many bad ingredient like in emission fume.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Which do you prefer, living in the city or in the country side? Please answer in details.


YOUR ANSWER:

I prefer living in the country side. because in the country side of air is fresh. but in the city of air is dirty and has many bad ingredient like in emission fume.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I prefer living in the country side. Because in the country side, the air is fresh, comparing it to the city where the air is dirty and has many bad ingredients like the emission fumes.

 

 

** Dear [이름], thanks once again. J Please take note of the corrections. Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you soon. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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