Which do you prefer, to work Monday through Thursday with longer working hours or to work Monday thr

2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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If possible, I prefer to work from Monday through Thursday with longer working hours rather than to work from Monday through Friday for eight hours a day. but it is impossible because goverment is infrastructure so we need to harmonize with private sector. In addition, we have the policy to decrease not only working hours per week but also working hours per day. Even though it is the trend in Korean society recently, if we decrease working hours there are many unpleasant people such as a mother who shall leave her children to a kindergarden and school.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! ^-^

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

This is a good composition and I have read it well.

We can talk about this later in class. See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)


If possible, I prefer to work from Monday through Thursday with longer working hours rather than to work from Monday through Friday for eight hours a day.

>>> Correct!

but it is impossible because goverment is infrastructure so we need to harmonize with private sector.

>>> However, it is impossible because the government is like an infrastructure so we need to harmonize with private sectors.

In addition, we have the policy to decrease not only working hours per week but also working hours per day.

>>> Correct!

Even though it is the trend in Korean society recently, if we decrease working hours there are many unpleasant people such as a mother who shall leave her children to a kindergarden and school.

>>> Even though it is the trend in the Korean society recently, if we decrease working hours then there will be many people such as mothers who\'ll leave their children to a kindergarten or school to work.

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