Which do you prefer, vegetables or meat? Why?
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I like vegetables. Beacause when i ate burger without vegetables, that\'s taste is not good, so i can\'t keep eating.
Vegetables have good chewing feeling, and low satiety than the meat.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Yu Min! Happy Monday. Thank you so much for your efforts doing your home. Again I really appreciate it!:-)
Vegetables have good chewing feeling, and low satiety than the meat.
Let\'s try to correct your sentences:
I like vegetables.
>> Correct
Beacause when i ate burger without vegetables, that\'s taste is not good, so i can\'t keep eating.
>> Because when I am eating burger without vegetables. the taste is not good, so I can\'t eat it well.
Vegetables have good chewing feeling, and low satiety than the meat.
>> Vegetables have good chewing feeling, and it has a low cholesterol than meat.
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