Which do you prefer, warm areas or cold areas? Why?
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I really hate being cold. I always choose summer if someone asks me that \"which do you prefer summer or winter\". Although, there are a lot of activities we can enjoy, I don\'t like doing something in winter due to cold weather. There are 4 seasons in Korea, we proud of having 4 seasons but I would like to live the country which has only one season and should not be cold. My preferences is related with my health condition. I am really sensitive on outside temperture, especially, I always have a hard time on season changes due to temperature gap between morning and evening. There are nurmerous things I can enjoy in summer such as swimming, surfing and wake board, in contast, I can go skiing in winter but it\'s all I could enjoy. I was really shocked to know that we can fall a sleep well under the cold condition, because I sleep in the exactly opposite condition. I need to adapt cold weather and then I can keep my condition well.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI really hate being cold.
>> I really hate feeling cold.
I always choose summer if someone asks me that \"which do you prefer summer or winter\".
>> CORRECT!
Although, there are a lot of activities we can enjoy, I don\'t like doing something in winter due to cold weather.
>> Although, there are a lot of activities we can enjoy, I don\'t like doing something on Winter due to the cold weather.
There are 4 seasons in Korea, we proud of having 4 seasons but I would like to live the country which has only one season and should not be cold.
There are 4 seasons in Korea, we proud of having 4 seasons but I would like to live the country which has only one season and should not be cold.
>> There are 4 seasons in Korea, and we are proud of having 4 seasons, but I would like to live in a country which has only one season and should not be cold.
My preferences is related with my health condition.
>> CORRECT!
I am really sensitive on outside temperture, especially, I always have a hard time on season changes due to temperature gap between morning and evening.
>> I am really sensitive with the outside temperture, especially I always have a hard time on season changes due to temperature gap between morning and evening.
There are nurmerous things I can enjoy in summer such as swimming, surfing and wake board, in contast, I can go skiing in winter but it\'s all I could enjoy.
There are nurmerous things I can enjoy in summer such as swimming, surfing and wake board, in contast, I can go skiing in winter but it\'s all I could enjoy.
>> There are nurmerous things I can enjoy in Summer such as swimming, surfing and wakeboarding; in contrast, I can go skiing on Winter but it\'s all I could enjoy.
I was really shocked to know that we can fall a sleep well under the cold condition, because I sleep in the exactly opposite condition.
>> CORRECT!
I need to adapt cold weather and then I can keep my condition well.
>> I need to adapt on the cold weather and then I can keep my condition well.
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