Which do you think is better, being single or being married? Why?
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As usual, reading your homework is fun. You always add humor to your answers.
I know that you\'re still single, I just want to see how you\'re going to answer the question. There is no wrong or right answer.
Not only was your answer humorous, it as full of wisdom too. Good job!
With regards to your grammar, there were still gray areas where you could improve on. Please check the revision for future reference.
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Which do you think is better, being single or being married? Why?
Being single is a lot of advantage.
>> Being single has a lot of advantages.
Being single can save lots of money, have massive free time. However Being single is one big problem. It is lonely.
>> If you\'re single, you have more opportunities to save lots of money. You have massive free time, too. However, being single has one big downside. It is lonely.
And I really want to talk of advantage or disadvantage about being married. But I have not been married. So I have no idea it would like be.
>> I really wanted to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of being married, however I haven\'t been married before, so I have no idea what it\'s like.
I just can make few guess. Maybe Being married seems like negotiation.
>> I can make a few guess though. Maybe, being married is like entering in a special arrangement where both man and wife has to negotiate terms for their union to be successful.
Two people always have to make conversation to deal with best way to make happy.
>> The couple has to always make a conversation on how to deal with any setback for them to be happy.
I think I pretty good at mediation between conflict. So I must be good at being married.
>> I think I am pretty good at being a mediator in between conflicts, so there\'s a good chance that I might be good at being married too.
One huge problem is that I need someone to being married. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
>> The only huge problem is that I need someone to be married to. LOL.
I\'m not sure which is better. I just want to experience being married. LOL
>> Correct
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