Which do you think is more beautiful, the sunrise or the sunset?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t choose just only one.
Because both are beautiful.
But If you request to choice only one,
I think the sunrise is better than the sunset.
When I watch the sunset, I feel a little bit lonely.
I don\'t know why I feel like this.
I feel like the emotion is aligned with coming home where there is no anyone.
I guess the reason that I can\'t meet the sun during the sunset longer than the sunrise.
Also, I think why I can move my body and do something after the sunrise.
However, I don\'t hate the sunset and It\'s just for selecting only one.
I love as the sunset much as the sunrise.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! I think the sunset is more beautiful because of its vibrant colors and peaceful atmosphere. However, I appreciate the sunrise more because it represents another day, another chance to enjoy life. ^^
~T. Jewel
I can\'t choose just only one.
>>I can\'t choose just one.
Because both are beautiful.
Because both are beautiful.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>Because they are both beautiful.
But If you request to choice only one, I think the sunrise is better than the sunset.
>>But if I have to choose only one, I think the sunrise is better than the sunset.
When I watch the sunset, I feel a little bit lonely.
When I watch the sunset, I feel a little bit lonely.
>>When I watch the sunset, I feel a little bit lonely.
I don\'t know why I feel like this.
I don\'t know why I feel like this.
>>CORRECT
I feel like the emotion is aligned with coming home where there is no anyone.
I feel like the emotion is aligned with coming home where there is no anyone.
>>I feel like the emotion is aligned with coming hoame to a place where no one is.
I guess the reason that I can\'t meet the sun during the sunset longer than the sunrise.
I guess the reason that I can\'t meet the sun during the sunset longer than the sunrise.
>>I guess the reason I can’t enjoy the sunset longer than the sunrise is because I can\'t meet the sun.
Also, I think why I can move my body and do something after the sunrise.
Also, I think why I can move my body and do something after the sunrise.
>>Also, I think that’s why I can move my body and do something after the sunrise.
However, I don\'t hate the sunset and It\'s just for selecting only one.
However, I don\'t hate the sunset and It\'s just for selecting only one.
>>However, I don’t hate the sunset; it’s just about selecting only one.
I love as the sunset much as the sunrise.
I love as the sunset much as the sunrise.
>>I love the sunset as much as the sunrise.
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