Which do you think is the best season for a vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think summer is best season of the year.
On summer, temperature is very high, so many people exhausted.
Also, summer is a middle season of the year, so it\'s suitable for a vacation.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you had a great summer vacation.
Kelly^^
I think summer is best season of the year.
>> I think summer is the best season of the year.
On summer, temperature is very high, so many people exhausted.
>> In summer, the temperature is very high, so many people feel exhausted.
Also, summer is a middle season of the year, so it\'s suitable for a vacation.
>> Also, summer is a middle season, so it\'s suitable for a vacation.
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