Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather?

2015-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I was young, I neither minded the cold weather, nor the hot weather. However, when I am getting older, I dislike the cold weather worse than the hot weather, although I actually do not like both of them. A moderate cold is okay. However, the extreme cold weather confines me doing outdoor activities and makes me shrink physically and mentally.When there is no sunshine in the cold weather, it is much worse.The gloomy day makes people feel depressed. The hot weather is also a problem. When it is hot, we feel exhausted even before trying to do something.It make us move sluggish and lose vitality.The weather affects our mood and impacts our lives. Weather’s daily influence has more of an impact on a person’s negative mood, rather than helping one’s positive mood.Higher temperatures raise a person with a low mood up, while things like wind or not enough sun made a low person feel even lower. As temperatures rise, intergroup conflicts also tend to jump and people become more violent.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday! 

How was the second day of the week?

I hope that you had an easy day at work.

Unfortunately, the weather in my city is rainy.

It\'s been raining for more than a week now. =c

You are right, the weather affects our mood.

It is really difficult to go outside of the house when it is raining.

It is better to lie down on bed and sleep. Hihihihihihi.

Have a good day.
Teacher Nina


When I was young, I neither minded the cold weather, nor the hot weather.

>> correct

However, when I am getting older, I dislike the cold weather worse than the hot weather, although I actually do not like both of them.

>> correct

>> OR: However, when I am getting older, I dislike the cold weather than the hot weather. Actually, I don\'t like both of them.

A moderate cold is okay.

>> correct

>> Better: Cool weather is okay.

However, the extreme cold weather confines me doing outdoor activities and makes me shrink physically and mentally.

>> correct

When there is no sunshine in the cold weather, it is much worse.

>> correct

The gloomy day makes people feel depressed.

>> correct

The hot weather is also a problem.

>> correct

When it is hot, we feel exhausted even before trying to do something.

>> correct

It make us move sluggish and lose vitality.

>> correct

The weather affects our mood and impacts our lives.

>> Did you mean: The weather affects our mood and has an impact in our lives.

Weather’s daily influence has more of an impact on a person’s negative mood, rather than helping one’s positive mood.

>> correct

Higher temperatures raise a person with a low mood up, while things like wind or not enough sun made a low person feel even lower.

>> Did you mean: Higher temperature raises a person\'s mood who is feeling down, things like wind or not enough sun makes him/ her feel even lower.

As temperatures rise, intergroup conflicts also tend to jump and people become more violent.

>> Did you mean:  As temperature rises, intergroup conflicts also tend to jump and people become more violent.

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