Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather?

2016-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I was younger, I think winter was colder than today, but I didn’t feel the cold wave at that time. I still remember my hometown often had quite a large amount of snow and I had to shovel snow piled in the front yard of my house and the narrow alley leading to the main street. Although the weather was freezing, I used to go out and play with other kids. Today’s winter is somewhat warmer than before, however I feel much colder when the temperature drops a little bit. As I’m getting older, I became not liking the cold weather. The hot weather is something that I don’t like either, however, if I have to choose between the hot or cold weather, I would go for the hot weather. When it is cold outside, I feel like my body shrinks and does my mind as well. The cold weather prevents us from doing outdoor activities and makes us stay inside. Not exposing yourself to the sunshine for a long time can make us feel down and depressed. I can endure the hot weather because I don't sweat much.

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Good afternoon, Sir [이름]! I really want to experience winter season. Hihihi.For now, I can say that I will like watching the snow and walking on top of it. It is because summer season in the Philppines is terrible.There was a time that the temperature reached 35 degrees Celsius. Thanks for your composition. See you.Teacher Nina   When I was younger, I think winter was colder than today, but I didn’t feel the cold wave at that time. >> correct I still remember my hometown often had quite a large amount of snow and I had to shovel snow piled in the front yard of my house and the narrow alley leading to the main street. >> correct Although the weather was freezing, I used to go out and play with other kids. >> correct Today’s winter is somewhat warmer than before, however I feel much colder when the temperature drops a little bit. >> correct As I’m getting older, I became not liking the cold weather. >> As I\'m getting older, I am starting not to like the cold weather. The hot weather is something that I don’t like either, however, if I have to choose between the hot or cold weather, I would go for the hot weather. >> correct When it is cold outside, I feel like my body shrinks and does my mind as well. >> correct The cold weather prevents us from doing outdoor activities and makes us stay inside. >> correct Not exposing yourself to the sunshine for a long time can make us feel down and depressed. >> correct I can endure the hot weather because I don\'t sweat much. >> correct

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