Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather

2017-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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I think hot weather is worst. Whenever the weater is hot, I always act irritated. Also I perspire as much. When my shirt clung to my wet, perspiring back. it feels me annoying. In korea, the Summer show a high percentage of humidity. And it increases discomfort index. In these reason, I choose the hot weather if i must select either hot weater or cold weather.

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I think hot weather is worst.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I think how weather is the worst climate.

Whenever the weater is hot, I always act irritated.

>>I\'m so irritated whenever the weather is hot.
 Also I perspire as much.

>>And also sweat a lot.

When my shirt clung to my wet, perspiring back.

>>My shirt will be wet when I sweat to much especially at my back.

 it feels me annoying.

>>Correct.

>>OR: I\'m annoyed.

In korea, the Summer show a high percentage of humidity.

>>In Korea, summer shows a high percentage of humidity.

 And it increases discomfort index. 

>>Correct.
 In these reason, I choose the hot weather if i must select either hot weater or cold weather.

>>In these reasons, I will choose hot weather between hot and cold weather.

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