Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather
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I think hot weather is worst.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I think how weather is the worst climate.
Whenever the weater is hot, I always act irritated.
>>I\'m so irritated whenever the weather is hot.
Also I perspire as much.
>>And also sweat a lot.
When my shirt clung to my wet, perspiring back.
>>My shirt will be wet when I sweat to much especially at my back.
it feels me annoying.
>>Correct.
>>OR: I\'m annoyed.
In korea, the Summer show a high percentage of humidity.
>>In Korea, summer shows a high percentage of humidity.
And it increases discomfort index.
>>Correct.
In these reason, I choose the hot weather if i must select either hot weater or cold weather.
>>In these reasons, I will choose hot weather between hot and cold weather.
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