Which do you value more, time or money?

2020-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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Time is money, time is important, but money is more important. If I have lots of money, I can do everything. If I have a lot of time , I can live forever. So that I prefer money.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! I hope you\'re doing great at work. Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I like your logic regarding the question. Even if we have a lot of time, if we don\'t have money, we probably couldn\'t make the most out of it.

Enjoy the rest of your Friday. Talk to you soon! ^_^

~T.Avery

Time is money, time is important, but money is more important.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Time and money are both important, but money is more valuable.

If I have lots of money, I can do everything.

>> CORRECT

If I have a lot of time , I can live forever.

>> CORRECT

So that I prefer money. 

>> Therefore, I prefer having money than having time.
 
 

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