Which do you value more, time or money?
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! I hope you\'re doing great at work. Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
I like your logic regarding the question. Even if we have a lot of time, if we don\'t have money, we probably couldn\'t make the most out of it.
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~T.Avery
Time is money, time is important, but money is more important.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Time and money are both important, but money is more valuable.
If I have lots of money, I can do everything.
>> CORRECT
If I have a lot of time , I can live forever.
>> CORRECT
So that I prefer money.
>> Therefore, I prefer having money than having time.
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