Which Down Under would you prefer to visit? What would you like to do or see there?

2021-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I love traveling abroad. Actually, I want to go to both of them. However, if I have only one chance, I would prefer Australia to New Zealand. I heard there is beautiful nature anywhere in New Zealand, though. I always used to look at the Sydney Opera house’s picture, when I look at some pictures about Australia. They were so fantastic. I wondered about there and dreamed that I will travel there someday. Also, my friend who I met at the last company and got along with is currently living in Australia. I sometimes give and take some messages with her, but it’s been almost over 3 years since I saw her for the last time so We have so much to catch up on. I want to meet her again in Australia and have a lot of conversations with her. I want to make good memories with her there. I also want to take some pictures with kangaroos. I just looked at them on TV, so I want to look at them with their babies in their pockets. It would seem amazing. Just imagining these things makes me happy.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Miss [이름].

I love traveling abroad. 
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Actually, I want to go to both of them. 
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However, if I have only one chance, I would prefer Australia to New Zealand. 
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>>> ORHowever, if I have to choose only one, I would prefer Australia to New Zealand.   
I heard there is beautiful nature anywhere in New Zealand, though. 
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I always used to look at the Sydney Opera house’s picture, when I look at some pictures about Australia. 
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They were so fantastic. 
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I wondered about there and dreamed that I will travel there someday. 
>>> I wondered about it and have dreamt that I will travel there someday.    
Also, my friend who I met at the last company and got along with is currently living in Australia. 
>>> Also, my friend who I met in the previous company and got along with is currently living in Australia.    
I sometimes give and take some messages with her, but it’s been almost over 3 years since I saw her for the last time so we have so much to catch up on. 
>>> correct     
I want to meet her again in Australia and have a lot of conversations with her. 
>>> correct     
I want to make good memories with her there. 
>>> correct     
I also want to take some pictures with kangaroos. 
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I just looked at them on TV, so I want to look at them with their babies in their pockets. 
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It would seem amazing. 
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>>> OR: It seems amazing.
Just imagining these things makes me happy.
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