Which education is better: Private School, Public School, or Homeschooling?

2019-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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I think a homeschooling is the best education. Some people prefer a private school or a public school. However, If we learn everything in these kind of schools, we can\'t develop our own thinking skills. This is because we have to follow their curriculum without our opinions. Then, we always do everything passively. On the other hand, we can improve our thinking skills by doing homeschooling ourselves. In a homeschooling, we should think deeply about every problem without questioning immediately to teacher. It is more active rather than studying in the school. Therefore, I prefer a homeschooling.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your answer, Chloe! Have a nice day today!
- Teacher Sandy-
I think a homeschooling is the best education.
>> I think a homeschooling is the best kind of education.
Some people prefer a private school or a public school.
>> correct
However, If we learn everything in these kind of schools, we can\'t develop our own thinking skills.
>> correct
This is because we have to follow their curriculum without our opinions.
>> correct
Then, we always do everything passively.
>> correct
On the other hand, we can improve our thinking skills by doing homeschooling ourselves.
>> correct
In a homeschooling, we should think deeply about every problem without questioning immediately to teacher.
>> In a homeschooling, we should think deeply about every problem without asking the teacher immediately.
It is more active rather than studying in the school.
>> correct
Therefore, I prefer a homeschooling.
>> correct

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