Which electronics brands do you trust most?
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To be honest, I don\'t have much trust in electronic devices.
Nevertheless, the answer is, I think it\'s an expensive Apple.
For example, it\'s true that an expensive-selling medical device company makes a profit more expensive, but I think they prefer a more environmentally, friendly and safely method that takes longer to test. In that sense, I think top ranked company of the global multi-national companies is trustful and recall is also quick. Apple is just one of them. Its reason is not their own pros.
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Hello, [이름] [이름]~
I can\'t still get over our conversation last meeting regarding this~ But you were right, despite the convenience of electronics, we should not rely too heavily on them...
Chammy
To be honest, I don\'t have much trust in electronic devices.
OR
>> To tell the truth, I cannot completely depend on electronics.
Nevertheless, the answer is, I think it\'s an expensive Apple.
>> Correct
For example, it\'s true that an expensive-selling medical device company makes a profit more expensive, but I think they prefer a more environmentally, friendly and safely method that takes longer to test.
>> Although an expensive medical device company may be more profitable, I believe they would prefer a more environmentally friendly and safer method, even if it takes longer to test.
In that sense, I think top ranked company of the global multi-national companies is trustful and recall is also quick.
>> In that sense, I believe the top-ranked global multinational companies are trustworthy, and their recall is also swift.
Apple is just one of them. Its reason is not their own pros.
>> Correct
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