Which evaluating sytem is better?

2012-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Evaluation the student’s progress is one of the major concerns of teachers. Recently, the debate between letter grading and pass-fail grading involves a lot of controversial issues in education circles. Although pass-fail system probably provokes student’s abilities and potential, it is difficult to evaluate students objectively, and to prepare students’ real life challenges as well. To measure student’s abilities obviously, letter system is more reliable than pass-fail system because of its objective criteria. For example, in the English speaking test, the assessment requires certain standards such as fluency, accuracy, vocabulary and grammar. On the contrary, “pass-fail” system adding teacher’s recommendation just depends on the subjectivity of each teacher. In this sense, the teacher’s statement about students causes the distrust of evaluation due to the difference of view of each teacher and the indefinite criteria.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your essay. Kindly check some of the corrections that I have made. Thank you and have a great day. See you in class! _T. Chloe_ Evaluation the student’s progress is one of the major concerns of teachers. >> Evaluating students progress is one of the major concerns of teachers. Recently, the debate between letter grading and pass-fail grading involves a lot of controversial issues in education circles. >> Correct! Although pass-fail system probably provokes student’s abilities and potential, it is difficult to evaluate students objectively, and to prepare students’ real life challenges as well. >> Although pass-fail system probably provokes students abilities and potentials, it is difficult to evaluate them objectively and prepare them for real life challenges as well.To measure student’s abilities obviously, letter system is more reliable than pass-fail system because of its objective criteria.  >>To measure the students abilities, the letter system is more reliable than pass-fail system because of its objective criteria. For example, in the English speaking test, the assessment requires certain standards such as fluency, accuracy, vocabulary and grammar. >> Correct!  On the contrary, “pass-fail” system adding teacher’s recommendation just depends on the subjectivity of each teacher. >> On the contrary, in pass-fail sytem, it\'s the prerrogative of the teacher to make his/her recommendation(s) about the students. In this sense, the teacher’s statement about students causes the distrust of evaluation due to the difference of view of each teacher and the indefinite criteria. >> In this sense, the teachers statement about students causes some doubts in the evaluation due to the difference of view of each teachers and their indefinite criteria.

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