Which events in your life are important changes?
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Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
It\'s definitely giving up math.
>> CORRECT!
Before I makes that decision, I couldn\'t be sure what I should do and what\'s my dream.
>> Before I made that decision, I wasn\'t sure what I should do and what\'s my dream.
But I talked with my sister, who did her entrance exam already, and she suggested You\'re not good at math actually, why don\'t you study other subjects instead of studying math?
>> I talked with my sister who did her entrance exam already and she said I\'m not good in math actually, so she suggested That I study other subjects instead of studying math.
In art university, they don\'t see your math grade.
>> In art university, they don\'t look at your math grades.
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