Which family holiday is you favorite?
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My favorite family travels are Jejudo, Hong chon Vivaldy park.
In Jejudo, I did the experience of picking tangerins.
And there are Hala mountin.
And in the Hong chon vivaldy [이름] there are Inpinity pool.
And also a Ocean World too.
These are my family\'s favorite travel.
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Hi [이름]!
See you tomorrow ^^
T. DON
My favorite family travels are Jejudo, Hong chon Vivaldy park.
In Jejudo, I did the experience of picking tangerins.
And there are Hala mountin.
And in the Hong chon vivaldy [이름] there are Inpinity pool.
And also a Ocean World too.
These are my family\'s favorite travel.
In Jejudo, I did the experience of picking tangerins.
And there are Hala mountin.
And in the Hong chon vivaldy [이름] there are Inpinity pool.
And also a Ocean World too.
These are my family\'s favorite travel.
>> My favorite family travels are Jejudo and Hong chon Vivaldy park. In Jejudo, I experienced picking tangerines. There is also the Hala mountian in Jejudo. In the Hong Chon Vivaldy [이름] there is the Infinity pool and Ocean World too. These are my family\'s favorite travels.
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