Which family holiday is your favorite?ᩚ
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My favorite family holiday is Chuseok because this Cuceok, I don\'t have to go to school, and most academies for seven days. It is very long holiday. I can relax for a long time. Secondly, I can get some money from my relatives. I love money so much. I get money in Seollal but somehow I like Chusak more than Seollal. I think the reason is because maybe Chuseok is just around corner. I can\'t wait this Chuseok.
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My favorite family holiday is Chuseok because this Cuceok, I don\'t have
to go to school, and most academies for seven days. It is very long
holiday. I can relax for a long time. Secondly, I can get some money
from my relatives. I love money so much. I get money in Seollal but
somehow I like Chusak more than Seollal. I think the reason is because
maybe Chuseok is just around corner. I can\'t wait this Chuseok.
>> My favorite family holiday is Chuseok because I don\'t have
to go to school and most academies for seven days. It is a very long
holiday. I can relax for a long time. Secondly, I can get some money
from my relatives. I love money so much. I get money in Seollal but
somehow I like Chuseok more than Seollal. I think the reason is because
maybe Chuseok is just around the corner. I can\'t wait this coming Chuseok.
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