Which famous celebrity influenced you the most and why?
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Of course, I would have to say It\'s the Eminem. It\'s because I started listening pop songs from Love the way your lie of his songs. The first time I listened to pop song was that song. And then I was keeping on searching the other pop songs.
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Hi Elic:)
It really shows that you are a huge Eminem fan. His songs are great. ^^
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Of course, I would have to say It\'s the Eminem.
>> Of course, I would have to say it\'s Eminem.
It\'s because I started listening pop songs from Love the way your lie of his songs.
>> It\'s because I started listening to pop songs because of the song \"Love the way you lie\".
The first time I listened to pop song was that song.
>> That was the first time I listened to pop songs.
And then I was keeping on searching the other pop songs.
>> Then, I kept searching for more songs like it.
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