Which famous celebrity influenced you the most and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, \'Park Hyo-shin\' influenced me the most.
He is a singer, and he is really good at singing so everybody call him that he is the legend.
He is little old because he is almost 50, but I don\'t feel like his songs are cold.
And I like his songs, and also I like his skills and voice.
And he is my role model for being a musician too.
His songs inspired me the most, so \'Park Hyo-shin\' is the celebrity who influenced me the most.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Wow! I watched one of his videos because I got curious. He really is good at what he does.
I hope that he can inspire more people into music. :)
I hope that he can inspire more people into music. :)
For me, \'Park Hyo-shin\' influenced me the most.
He is a singer, and he is really good at singing so everybody call him that he is the legend.
And I like his songs, and also I like his skills and voice.
And he is my role model for being a musician too.
His songs inspired me the most, so \'Park Hyo-shin\' is the celebrity who influenced me the most.
>> CORRECT
He is a singer, and he is really good at singing so everybody call him that he is the legend.
>> He is a really good singer so everybody calls him a legend.
He is little old because he is almost 50, but I don\'t feel like his songs are cold.
>> He is a little old. He is almost at his 50\'s but I don\'t feel like his songs are old as well.
And I like his songs, and also I like his skills and voice.
>> I like his songs, skills and voice.
And he is my role model for being a musician too.
>> He is my role model for being a musician too.
His songs inspired me the most, so \'Park Hyo-shin\' is the celebrity who influenced me the most.
>> CORRECT
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